Saturday, January 23, 2010

Ending

As much as I think about the ending, and as much as I'd love to have it end happily, I don't think I'm keeping it this way.

For a child to be dead, that's kind of extreme to not have a punishment for Limits in the end, even if he was bullied. And btw I'm going to make the bullying much worse. I realize after reading over the script that I can make it much worse for him so that I can get the jury's sympathy. I'm going to have the jury's verdict come out as innocent, but then have the judge overrule it. What's the punishment going to be? Stay tuned...

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