Thursday, June 2, 2011

Changes to third draft

I never had a real reason for Corryn being involved in the experiment other than to do something important, but today I realized that if Corryn's father is constantly making her feel like she's not good enough, it makes sense that she would try to find a way to pass on information so people won't feel stupid. However, not everyone comes to the same conclusions with information they have. This experiment can't work, at least not yet, because everyone's ability to understand what they know is different. Some people study, take tests, and then immediately forget what they studied. Some people don't need to study because learning comes naturally to them. Wendy has an ability to understand the information in her head because she already had a brain that could process information quickly. Whereas, Wyatt's brain did not possess this ability.

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