Monday, December 14, 2009

organizing

Today I took the time to reorganize the main plot points of my script. I wrote the first draft with Kate losing the transfer hearing my pinch 1 and introducing Amir into the picture as the midpoint, which I might keep that way, but everything after Amir needs to change. I'm not going to cut everything, but it will be moved. After Amir (or maybe the scene before he's introduced) I'd like to show Kate still worrying about her other case. I don't think she should be entirely focused on Limit's case yet, so the whole scene where she listens to the tapes won't be shows until much later.

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