Characters

I've been building on the history of my characters since that isn't coming across as well as I'd liked. I actually like my supporting characters, but it's really Kate, Jeff and Limits that I need to work on.

Also I changed the beginning of the script (the shooting scene) a little. Now it hints at the relationship Kelly used to have with Limits and it shows that Ms. Fry doesn't care as much as she did in my first draft.

This is really bad but I'll admit I like going backwards before I move on. I'm really trying not to. The second act is coming along so I'm not worried...yet.