Done Second Draft!

Even though I'm much more satisfied with this draft, it's possible I may have taken out too much. I have to go back and see if everything makes sense.

Also, a huge problem I'm still having is incorporating all of the characters in the whole script. It's my fault that I have so many characters, so I have to fix that.

Now that I made the change from juvenile to criminal court the midpoint, I think that works much better. AND IT'S A LOT SHORTER =)