"the only thing constant is change"

...and I'm continuing to make changes.

I realize that in taking out the large chunks of my script in the last draft, I left a lot of things unanswered and a few scenes have some technical problems. All of this will be fixed for the final draft. I also noticed that I left Brodie's story kind of up in the air, and I want to give his ending more of a purpose for Limits.

Done Second Draft!

Even though I'm much more satisfied with this draft, it's possible I may have taken out too much. I have to go back and see if everything makes sense.

Also, a huge problem I'm still having is incorporating all of the characters in the whole script. It's my fault that I have so many characters, so I have to fix that.

Now that I made the change from juvenile to criminal court the midpoint, I think that works much better. AND IT'S A LOT SHORTER =)

Thank you snow!

I finished my new outline this morning and I've fixed up to the midpoint. I'm trying to cut out as much as possible and not add anything new to make it longer.

Thanks to the snow, it's a great day to stay in bed and write =)